The Deflowering

ORIGINAL SCENE TREATMENT (excerpt)

Scene opens on a black frame, as we hear Amy (Piper Perri) giggle and ask 'Adam, what are you doing?' Her boyfriend (Robby Echo) replies, 'We're almost there babe, just hang on a little longer. . . ' He slowly removes his hand from over her eyes and, from Amy's POV, we see where they are for the first time. It's their anniversary and the 19-year-old nerdy couple are celebrating at Adam's new place. Amy gets her bearings and looks around at the rental for the first time. It's huge, a mansion . . . way better than his parent's basement! Adam proudly boasts that they can now do whatever they want without his folks watching and he has a whole romantic day planned for their anniversary. Amy is shocked and confused as to how Adam can afford such a place but he brushes it off, saying he got a new job and that he's really getting his life together to support them in the future. When Amy asks for a tour, Adam nervously rushes her through the house to get to his room. This seems strange, considering how impressive the house is . . . but Amy takes his hand and follows him inside his bedroom. He nervously looks down the hall before shutting the door. The camera lingers on the closed door for a moment before slowly moving to another part of the house, where we see a gang of tough-looking guys weighing and stacking drug pouches into a delivery bag.

The couple make out inside Adam's bedroom for a few minutes when there is a loud bang on his door. One of the men from down the hall demand he join them in the living room. Adam clamps his hand over Amy's mouth and makes up a cheap excuse but they call him a bitch and tell him to come downstairs now. Before she can say anything, Adam tells her it's just his new roommates playing a joke on him and tells her to be quiet and wait in his room. She sits on the bed confused before deciding to go investigate. When she creeps into the living room, she is stunned to see her nerdy little boyfriend surrounded by the gang . . . who are berating and teasing him as he counts the kilos on the table. She overhears enough to discover that he has been helping them out with their operation in exchange for free room and board. He fucked up the count on their last delivery so they are about to kick his ass out if he doesn't make up for it. Adam looks weak and nervous, as he tries to smooth talk his way out from the guys. They enjoy having the little nerd to beat up on and use as a punching bag, especially since it's so clear that Adam wants to be one of them. But all that stops when they realize Amy is standing there. . .